wow this is a really good poem. It makes me feel really bad for the boy who wrote it. Wish i could be there to help and comfort him. It communicates a feeling that everyone can relate to. thats the best part
Re--wind ... my sad life......
breathing heavily.. sweat rolling down his face...
suddenly his eyes open...from a nightmare he awakes
evil thoughts creep through his mind...of all the people who betrayed him.
making him feel like life has no meaning....opening that door to the hidden pain..
violent words to him are always spit...
they are the reasons for the marks and scars on his wrists...
the signs of a boy who couldn't take it anymore...
feeling more alone than ever before...
he always would lie.. saying he was feeling fine..
but it was easy to tell.. that he was hurting inside..
you could see him shaking...you could see tears in his eyes..
people would try to help...but he stayed away... no one knew why
he always thought all he needed was to relax...to rewind...
but... he knows inside....in order to keep his life inline..
he must write down his life in the form of these rhymes...
in the hope love and peace is what he’ll find...
out of everything that he knows.....it seems now he’s losing control...
he feels like he’s wasting his life....
come give him a chance....come give him a try....
help him find love and peace....help him rewind...
help him realize....he’s not alone...
help him live his life.....
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